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I'm stuck on the floor
Searching for the cure somehow
You believe in me
But I just can't love myself
I crawl and crawl
Feel my heart beat slow
As you try to pick me up
From my sorrow
You whisper
Tomorrow will be better
But I only hear

My demon roses calling out to me
I see my blood on broken candles
It's nothing that I wish to do
I only want to show I'm in love you
I can't believe I am like this
My only want is you to kiss
But my demon roses are calling out to me

I failed myself once again
I failed you once more
My arm is so sore my love
I sometimes wish that you would yell at me
And I wish I wasn’t always sorry
I tried to drown myself in water
But you came and pulled me out
I could sing and bleed forever
I'm sorry
But you embrace me
You whisper
Tomorrow will be better
But the only thing I can see is

My demon roses calling out to me
I see my blood on broken candles
It's nothing that I wish to do
I only want to show I'm in love you
I can't believe I am like this
My only want is you to kiss
But my demon roses are calling out to me

Tonight I'll change I swear
Today I'll become a better person
Tomorrow I'll pay you back
But why oh why do I still wish to fall
Fall down as
I'm stuck on the floor
Searching for the cure somehow
You believe in me
But I just can't love myself
Finally
You kiss me
Hug me
Only one who loves me
And I know everything will be alright

My demon roses calling out to me
I see my blood on broken candles
It's nothing that I wish to do
I only want to show I'm in love you
I can't believe I am like this
My only want is you to kiss
But my demon roses are calling out to me

Behind these close doors
You’re the air I breathe now
You're the one I see now
My new addiction
My new salvation
I'm not broken any longer
Oh you made me stronger
My wounds are healed
I only want to be by your side
I'm alright
I'm ok
You were right
I run to you through glass
I'm safe now with you
But still

My demon roses calling out to me
I see my blood on broken candles
It's nothing that I wish to do
I only want to show I'm in love you
I can't believe I am like this
My only want is you to kiss
But my demon roses are calling out to me

I never felt like this before
I'm just lying with you
Together on the floor
We just hold each other
And you keep my demon roses calling out to me
Gone forever
Well, what can I say? :D Hmm, I don't know...eh guess there is a side of me a lot of people don't know about.

Enjoy :)

My Demon Rose Lyrics (C) J-Rex1463
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rhaeigan Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I connect to your lyrics a lot. Really.
I think you and I have experienced similar things
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008  Student General Artist
really?

what did it make u feel like
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rhaeigan Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
just reminds me of things I've had to deal with. Things that totally UTTERLY suck. Suck enough to make you scream and cry all day and not wanna do anything else.
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner May 1, 2008  Student General Artist
Oh i see where u are coming from
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RegalDragon Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Professional Filmographer
Man...I wish I could see that song played out. Those are really cool lyrics.
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
I'm glad u really like it :)
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Xinck16 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
Just a small thing, J... Where it says "I only want is you to kiss", I'd think "My only want is you to kiss". Just a suggestion.
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
thanks nicky, u actually helped me out with that. I had a hard time with that line
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Xinck16 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
No prob! I'm pretty good when it comes to grammar!
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
YES U ARE XD THANKS NICKY!
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Xinck16 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
You're welcome!
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Abrainthatleaks Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
There are so many things that can violently change a person... Getting close can feel like waking up sometimes... Life is a mystery to me :/ I'm glad you have something to embrace :)
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
Yeah, I see what you mean. I only got one thing to embrace right now well for now. I hope I can keep it with me forever.

So what did u think?
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Abrainthatleaks Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008
I like it but it's hard for me because it comes at me from my point of view... and I'm a pessimist... and I relate it back to me... :S What I think is you found someone to love... but that worries me too... :/ It's best if this is about yourself because it is impossible to love someone if you don't love yourself first :S I know this... but even I can't take my own advice... I want it to be positive but I am negative :S I read everything you post... you know... right?? :D
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008  Student General Artist
Just an experience a friend of mine had that I could relate to in a way. Why is that worrying you? I know u read pretty much most of them
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Abrainthatleaks Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008
It worries me because I know how I am when I crash... I crash often but every time it gets me a little closer to giving up... I really don't think others should experience that... I try not to let myself get too positive about anything because I'm setting myself up for disappointment otherwise... See... armed with that foreknowledge... I don't think it can hurt so bad:S I try to read as much as I can on here... though I often don't have time... I just can't sleep today :S
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008  Student General Artist
Well I see where you are coming from. And I understand perfectly about not letting yourself get too positive about anything because you might be setting yourself up for a dissapointment. I know what I am doing, I know what I am setting myself up for and I know the penalty for it and the positive for it. I won't fall to anything like a lot of people here have been recentley saying to me.
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Abrainthatleaks Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008
:D You understand then :D I will try to let myself have peace of mind then... try... :D
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2008  Student General Artist
yes i do
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DigitalScratch Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow O_O I love this. I like the chorus :D
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
thank you! I'm glad u like it and thanks for the fav :D
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AteMozzarella Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
oh roses XD
There's my obsession >3
And I somehow imagined the chorus in my mind's eye. I should really get around to doing arts for this XD
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J-Rex1463 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008  Student General Artist
I'm happy u like roses XD and i am happy i inspired u in a way! Thank you for reading!
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